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Postby Snore Chan » Thu Aug 11, 2016 5:38 pm

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Hello! I am A nerd who has
legit no life! I write story's and books. I also read/Draw manga
I watch anime also. I also Roleplay. I love writing basically..
On a less nerdy note. If you wanna start up a conversation just
gimme a PM ;)

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Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

Postby Snore Chan » Fri Aug 12, 2016 6:09 pm

YO!

Lets start a discussion amongst out selves. Do you like it? Any tips?
M Y - L I F E
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Hello! I am A nerd who has
legit no life! I write story's and books. I also read/Draw manga
I watch anime also. I also Roleplay. I love writing basically..
On a less nerdy note. If you wanna start up a conversation just
gimme a PM ;)

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Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

Postby Nebullama » Fri Aug 12, 2016 7:02 pm

I love it! The poor kid...

Also, you used both "he" and "she" to describe the main character. What gender are they?
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Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

Postby Snore Chan » Fri Aug 12, 2016 7:42 pm

Its a mistake, The main character is a dude lemme fix that.
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Hello! I am A nerd who has
legit no life! I write story's and books. I also read/Draw manga
I watch anime also. I also Roleplay. I love writing basically..
On a less nerdy note. If you wanna start up a conversation just
gimme a PM ;)

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Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

Postby scmarshtacky » Fri Aug 12, 2016 9:43 pm

Snore Chan wrote:
YO!
Lets start a discussion amongst out selves. Do you like it? Any tips?


Wow, poor kid indeed.

What grade of elementary school is he in exactly? This seems like pretty intense behavior for 5-6 year old kindergarteners. Maybe 4th or 5th graders would pull that kind of behavior. Then again, it's been quite some time since I've been in those grades, so maybe kids really are that mean to each other these days.

I think you've got a pretty solid start with it. ^^ I look forward to seeing the next few chapters. Hopefully the guy (will we learn his name any time soon? Or did I just totally miss that somewhere?) will find a friend and learn to fight back against those who are threatening him.
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Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

Postby Snore Chan » Fri Aug 12, 2016 10:20 pm

He was home schooled now he's 11/12 last ish year of elementary.

EDIT: You'll learn his name later on *HEHE*
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Hello! I am A nerd who has
legit no life! I write story's and books. I also read/Draw manga
I watch anime also. I also Roleplay. I love writing basically..
On a less nerdy note. If you wanna start up a conversation just
gimme a PM ;)

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Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

Postby Snore Chan » Fri Aug 12, 2016 11:54 pm

Updated my chapter and logo for the book! <33
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Hello! I am A nerd who has
legit no life! I write story's and books. I also read/Draw manga
I watch anime also. I also Roleplay. I love writing basically..
On a less nerdy note. If you wanna start up a conversation just
gimme a PM ;)

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Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

Postby Snore Chan » Sat Aug 13, 2016 9:13 pm

Time skipped sorry for shorter chapter xD
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Hello! I am A nerd who has
legit no life! I write story's and books. I also read/Draw manga
I watch anime also. I also Roleplay. I love writing basically..
On a less nerdy note. If you wanna start up a conversation just
gimme a PM ;)

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