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PostPosted: Thu Aug 11, 2016 5:38 pm
by Snore Chan
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Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2016 6:09 pm
by Snore Chan
YO!

Lets start a discussion amongst out selves. Do you like it? Any tips?

Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2016 7:02 pm
by Nebullama
I love it! The poor kid...

Also, you used both "he" and "she" to describe the main character. What gender are they?

Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2016 7:42 pm
by Snore Chan
Its a mistake, The main character is a dude lemme fix that.

Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2016 9:43 pm
by scmarshtacky
Snore Chan wrote:
YO!
Lets start a discussion amongst out selves. Do you like it? Any tips?


Wow, poor kid indeed.

What grade of elementary school is he in exactly? This seems like pretty intense behavior for 5-6 year old kindergarteners. Maybe 4th or 5th graders would pull that kind of behavior. Then again, it's been quite some time since I've been in those grades, so maybe kids really are that mean to each other these days.

I think you've got a pretty solid start with it. ^^ I look forward to seeing the next few chapters. Hopefully the guy (will we learn his name any time soon? Or did I just totally miss that somewhere?) will find a friend and learn to fight back against those who are threatening him.

Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2016 10:20 pm
by Snore Chan
He was home schooled now he's 11/12 last ish year of elementary.

EDIT: You'll learn his name later on *HEHE*

Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

PostPosted: Fri Aug 12, 2016 11:54 pm
by Snore Chan
Updated my chapter and logo for the book! <33

Re: Freak // New Chapters Added Daily <3 //

PostPosted: Sat Aug 13, 2016 9:13 pm
by Snore Chan
Time skipped sorry for shorter chapter xD