Eldemore

This is the thread in which Chocolate Kittens(ME!) writes poems when I get bored. I welcome criticism, compliments, constructive criticism, and insults. Basically anything that will make me write better. I will manly write the English form of haikus, or couplets but I will try and tell a story within each one. And they'll provably be spread out through out this thread wherever I feel like putting them. I will probably link to them with the front post, however.

February stuff
18th Feb

Haiku about my cat
Small black cat meowing
Little white whiskers wiggling
Dreaming of toy mice

Poem about a dragon
Shiny gold scales flash by
Fire blooming over the sky
The little people run away
For the dragon has come to play
(Okay, that got a little more dragony than I had in mind! Don't worry, the dragon does want to play, but the humans just don't understand yet!)


Ode to a math problem
Math problem, I will write you down
I will sit and stare and frown
One day I will figure this out
Which is the correct route
WIP poem.