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I would like some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism

Postby Darkcrescendo » Thu Mar 12, 2015 9:00 pm

http://www.wattpad.com/story/34799108-w ... l-morality
Here's the link:
Its my MLA research paper and worth a lot of points. Help me get a "A" :3
God knows I need the credits. Its about Gay Marriage and all details are in the post. :thumbup:
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Re: I would like some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism

Postby scmarshtacky » Wed Mar 25, 2015 12:02 am

Has the due date for your paper already passed?
I just randomly happen to be browsing around in here and noticed this, but since it was posted a little while ago, I wasn't sure if this was still in the editing process or if you had turned it in already. :P
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