For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby cjr09 » Thu Apr 23, 2015 5:33 pm

I'm really glad you guys like it! It makes me super happy to hear people are reading~

Also, bonus points if you can point out the fandom reference in the second chapter.

Sorren'll warm up to us. Eventually.
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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby Anwyn » Thu Apr 23, 2015 8:13 pm

Wow, this is amazing XD This is only my second event ay Eldemore and I'm already super pumped up for more.
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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby Benathorn » Fri Apr 24, 2015 11:12 am

    I'm with Silver on this, I demand all the chapters to be done immediately so that I may read more! So excited to read the rest now and I always love reading your event fanfiction. Your writing is wonderful Cj and I love how you captured the character interactions and even almost got Sorren to smile faintly in that scene with the dires-- that part was so sweet it made me smile actually. ^^

    Now I can't wait to read the next chapter! *Waits eagerly*
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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby scmarshtacky » Fri Apr 24, 2015 11:56 am

So much staff posting, and I'm just going to add to it~ Love your style cjr. It fits perfectly with the already written storyline, and had a lot of nice humor. I definitely plan to follow it as the event goes on. ^^
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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby cjr09 » Fri Apr 24, 2015 3:01 pm

How many things am I going to name? All of them.

I'm not as happy with this chapter as I was with previous, so I'll probably go back and edit in places, but if I do, I'll post about it.

This chapter was not sarcastic enough for me

But I'm super glad you guys enjoy it! I read most of your posts in class and I think that was the first time ever in my life that I blushed my teacher asked me if I was okay because I couldn't stop smiling it was mildly mortifying

But yeah I hope you like it!

Also, for those of you that care about useless facts- I have hit 6522 words. I've done less on full fledged stories I don't understand how this keeps happening am I getting better at making things longer is there more information to play off of I just don't know
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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby Silverhart » Fri Apr 24, 2015 5:49 pm

Flufferbuns! XD I love it. Sorren needs more Flufferbuns in his life. May waves of adorable Flufferbuns overwhelm his stodginess.

I love how you name everything. Keep it up! I want more! XD
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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby Archer » Fri Apr 24, 2015 5:52 pm

Every single interaction is so great! Not to mention, I'm really enjoying your portrayal of Sorren. XD

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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby Kalo » Fri Apr 24, 2015 8:29 pm

I'm loving this so far! The names are fantastic, and I love it when Sorren gets teased and bothered, and you seem to have captured his character really well! I couldn't help but think about a book about a German Shepherd named Cracker when you named Cracker. It was called Cracker! The Best Dog in Vietnam, or something along those lines. I have no idea if that has anything to do with the name, but I love it and the given reason for it regardless. And all the creatures! XD This will get pretty overwhelming for the character, and I can't wait to see what you have in store ^u^ I'm going to have to go find all of your other event fanfictions and read them, now.
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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby cjr09 » Sat Apr 25, 2015 6:01 pm

Let me tell you though THE FLUFF IN THIS CHAPTER

Honestly my favorite things about today's release is the amazing Servals and the graduation of Sorren from "Angry bird" to "Angry mother bird" and it makes me happy

I had a headache while writing and ended up downing some medicine halfway through to stave it off, so if nothing makes sense, you know why.

Also, @Kalo- Way to nail the reference! That's exactly why I named Cracker "Cracker", I adored that book with everything I am, and still adore it to this day. tho you shouldn't read any of my other things because I have never finished a thing ever in my life

But yeah, I hope you enjoy! I think this one's a little shorter than the others, but I'm still super happy with it because I was smiling and laughing the entire time, so I hope it makes you guys smile too~

Also, shoutout to Sphye for helping me name the Servals because that was sheer brilliance.
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Re: For The Birds {An Eldemore Event Fanfiction}

Postby Silverhart » Sat Apr 25, 2015 6:37 pm

I can understand Sorren's concern with clingy servals... he is part bird after all... XD

That was hilarious by the way! I especially loved the "Sorren! Look at this cute thing! It's so cute! Isn't it cute, Sorren? Don't you just want to snuggle it's cute wittle face to ittie bittie bits? Sorren? Why are you backing away?"

I love seeing the character (I guess it's us XP) forging a little friendship between Sorren. It's sweet. ^^ Though I didn't think the Angry Birdman capable of blushing. XD
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