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The Search For My Brother! (CANCELLED)

Postby Ellis » Sat Aug 29, 2015 7:56 pm

I will write a story for you, this is going to be fun.

Its about a girl named Lizzie, she is 15 years old and she is living alone in a town. Her parents disappeared for some time ago, and she has a brother, his name is Jack. But he too disappeared but one day Lizzie gets a letter from someone she doesn't know. That says her brother is alive and lives in a city called "Safe City"

Then you probably ask "Why is the city called Safe City?" Well that is because its a city where "Hunters" can't hunt in, but since humans started to live there too, then "Hunters" have the right to hunt there just to protect humans. But that happens only if "They" hurts humans.

But that doesn't happen often, and in this story it wont.

Now you probably asks "Hunters? You mean normal hunters"? And what's up with "They"? What I mean with "Hunters" is that these Hunters are not normal Hunters. These Hunters hunt Form-Switcher and Shape-Switcher. (I say Form-Switcher and Shape-Switcher, I know it sounds weird.) But only if they hurts humans.

What I mean by "They" Well Form-Switcher and Shape-Switcher is what I mean by "They"

There is a differences between a Form-Switcher and a Shape-Switcher. A Form-Switcher is a human but humans don't see them like one because they have cat ears and cat tails.

And Shape-Switcher is too a human but humans don't see them like one, but a Shape-Switcher has instead fox ears and fox tails.

Some Hunters are friendly and some are not. In this story you will follow Lizzie who is a Form-Switcher, trying to find her brother Jack, that is too a Form-Switcher. First she must find Safe City. But this will be a challenge for her, but she wont go alone. Her cat Swift will join in this journey. (Being a Form-Switcher or Shape-Switcher makes them understand what cats and foxes says, and if a human is close by, they too can hear what a cat and a fox can say.)

Keep in mind that, my grammar and spelling is bad, so please, please! Don't point out any wrongs or point out a part and then correct it or say it should have been written this way. Please don't. I already have been scarred once with someone complaining for not being able to read what I wrote once, (Don't worry, it was on another site.) first I though,

it would't bother me, but it did bother me. And now I just went of topic. Sorry.

But this will be a challenge for me to write as well. But one thing for sure I will enjoy writing this! Keep in mind this is a very friendly story. I will start writing right now! Oh and there is going to be some grammar or spelling mistakes, because of the time. Its around 2AM for me.

I got to exited about writing! >.< Keep in mind that I will try my best to make it read able.
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Re: The Search For My Brother!

Postby Ellis » Sat Aug 29, 2015 9:17 pm

Chapter 1

I woke up in my room, it was a day just like a normal one. I sat up in my bed,
I could see Swift still sleeping beside my pillow. I smiled at her and decided to leave her sleeping.
With a yawn I left my bed, I changed my out my pajamas, into a pink skirt and a blue shirt.
I didn't really care what I wear, I was fine with anything.

I then starting to fix some breakfast, a normal breakfast.
I usual ate some yogurt, I know it wasn't much but that's all I ate in the mornings.
Once I finished my breakfast, I began to make my way out of my house.

Why? Well I have school, I knew Swift would be angry at me for not waking her up,
but I couldn't wake her up, because then she would be angry on me for that.
Sometimes I don't understand Swift at all.

I opened the door and left the house, I forgot to fix myself before leaving.
Because my mind was focusing on school, I walked the usual path towards school.
A nice path, there were not many cars that went by. Mostly humans were to scared
to drive by. They were scared because they believed

that we might suddenly get powers and then just use them on their car.
And flip it while they were in it. I laughed at the thought, humans are funny, but
dangerous as well, especial Hunters.

I have never met one before, my mother told me to stay away from them, luckily.
Hunters don't seems to take an interest in this little town.

I was happy for that, but then again. How cool would it be to meet one?
Soon enough I arrived at my school, it wasn't so big. But I was early this day.
I didn't have any friends.

Because my father always told me "You don't need friends, they are just in the way,
you must focusing on your homework.
" Or something like that. It was a warm morning,
the breeze was nice on my skin.

I didn't really want to go to school, but I know that I have to, so I went inside.
The day went away quickly, and school ended for today.
Then I went home.

I check the mailbox, to a find a letter. Then I went inside my house,
I was greeted by an angry cat.

The black and white cat was angry at me, I gazed down at Swift and said
"I'm sorry for not waking you up." And I wasn't going to wait for her to
reply. I went past her,

I sat down on a chair in the kitchen. I dropped my bag on the floor,
I had the letter in my hand. Then I opened it. Swift jumped up on the dining table,
and said "What's that?" Of course Swift knew what it was but I answered anyway.
"A letter, and its from someone I don't know." Swift looked at me with a confused
look on her face, she noticed that I was confused as well.

Then I began to read the letter aloud "Hello there, I don't know if this
letter will come to the right Form-Switcher but, I hope it does.
I know about you Lizzie and Swift as well,

but don't let that creep you out, I mean no harm with this letter.
I'm writing this letter because you need to know something.

That is that your brother is still alive, and is safe.
He is in a city called Safe City.
Its far from the town you live in, but now that

know were he is. Will you search for him or not search for him?
"

And with that the letter ended. I was out of words, my brother was alive?
Jack was alive in a city called Safe City?

Swift was the first one to break the silence, "Lizzie, what are you going to do?"
I wasn't sure how to reply to that, but then again. How was I supposed to find
Safe City? In the letter it said it was far away from the town I live in.

And the letter could be all a lie, I wasn't sure what to do.
I could see Swift was waiting patiently for an answer,
there was a silence for a few minutes.

But then I finally broke the silence "I'm going to search for my brother!"
If the letter was right, then I must go. Its a risk I will take, it will be
difficult but I will try.

Then Swift said "If you are going, then I'm going" I was happy that she said that.
"Then let's search for my brother together!" I said happily and then I began to think,
of things I should take with me.

This wasn't going to be easy, but at least I'm not alone.



End of chapter 1.

O.O Wow, this took longer than I expected! But I enjoyed it. Feel free to comment what you think! And sorry for lack of details.
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Re: The Search For My Brother!

Postby Ellis » Sat Aug 29, 2015 11:21 pm

Chapter 2


I finished packing my stuff, I packed a few change of clothes. I used my bag.
Then as much food I could fit in, and some water bottles. I wasn't sure what to take with me,
Then I said "I guess this is enough." then I looked at Swift.

Swift wasn't sure about the things I packed,
but I guess that's that. "Oh maybe I should take a blanket with me!" I said and went into the living room
to find a blanket.

Swift was just being quiet, I returned with a white blanket,
not the prettiest one but it will do.

It was quite late now, so Swift and I decided to leave in the morning.
I hurried of to my bedroom, then switched out my clothes to my pajamas.
Then I sat down on my bed,

I was worried how I would do on my own.
But of course it would take days, just thinking about the time made me scared.

Swift said "We will be fine, don't worry." Well that was she says, but
I can tell she is unsure. All I did was nodding.

Then I laid down in my bed. This was the last time
in a while that I was going to sleep in my bed.

Surprisingly I didn't have any trouble with sleeping.
I woke up by something poke my face, I opened my blue eyes to see Swift.
"Its time Lizzie." Swift said,

I nodded and sat up. Soon I left my bed, then switched out my pajamas,
this time I was wearing red jeans and a red shirt.

Swift doubted my choose of clothes, but
I ignored her, I went to the bathroom.

I looked myself in the mirror. I could see my cat ears.
They were red colored with darker stripes. As well with my tail.
My tail was red too with darker red stripes.

Meaning I was a red tabby, sure I could change my form to a cat,
I mean that is the point of being a Form-Switcher.

I have heard that Shape-Switcher can turn into foxes as well,
and there is a way to detect them from normal foxes.

That is that they carry their human scent, but its a very faint scent.
That goes for Form-Switchers as well.

After brushing my hair, I went to the kitchen and ate a
decent meal. To make sure I wont get hungry for a while.

Then I went back to the bathroom to brush my teeth.
Swift was waiting for me in front of the door,
soon I joined her and together we left our house.

I wasn't worried about missing school, since I hated school.
But the thing that worried me the most was,
how will I get food once I run out of food?

I guess Swift would force me to hunt in my cat form,
I remembered that my dad tried to make me eat a mouse.
I refused! Of course I would!

Poor mouse, then I remembered how I refused to come out of my room
after that. I think Swift would have just laughed at me.

Enough of that, me and Swift wasn't sure which way to go.
I suggested that we would ask someone but Swift
refused. only telling that we can find Safe City on our own.

I doubt that, but I wasn't going to argue.
So our journey began, we walked towards the entrance of town,
then soon enough we was outside of town.

We was greeted by forest very fast, but that didn't bother us.
Swift was quite as always.

The breeze was cool, the sun was covered up in clouds.
Swift was worried that it would start raining,
but I don't think will rain.

But I was wrong, after ten minutes of walking,
rain started to pour down.

I forgot my umbrella too,
Swift was very angry at me,
every time when I tried to speak to her.

She ignored me, well I can understand that.
There was this strange scent, I gazed down at Swift.

Swift seems to know what I was going to ask, so she replied
before I could ask. "Human scent, close too." Fear sparkled inside of me.
"Do you think it could be a Hunter?" I asked as I kept my gaze at Swift.

"Could be, hard to tell with this rain. We should be
careful.
" She said with a serious voice.

I replied "O-of course." I wasn't sure how to answer,
there weren't many humans in town, but just knowing
that I and Swift are close by one is kind of scary.

I was so focused on thinking if it could been a Hunter,
that I didn't notice the steps behind us.

Swift was bristling, seems like she just noticed the steps behind
us right now as well.

"Stop right there!" A voice behind us made me flinch as I stopped.
Swift stopped as well, but she didn't flinch.


End of chapter 2.


I forgot to mention that Form-Switcher and Shape-Switcher can change their form into a cat or a fox, depends on which they are. And sorry for the lack of details and lack of talk.
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Re: The Search For My Brother!

Postby Ellis » Sun Aug 30, 2015 1:05 am

Chapter 3

Maybe turning around was a bad idea, there was a human there.
It was male, he had short black hair, he was wearing jeans and a black shirt with long sleeves.
The first thing I was looking after on him was a weapon.

If he had one, then he was a Hunter, if not then is not.
But since he stopped us, I assume he is a Hunter.
I searched his face. I could tell that he was tired.

"Are you some trouble makers?" He asked,
his voice was was dark, but I could already tell
that he was trying to sound cold.

But dark and a bit soft, I wasn't sure how to reply.
I opened my mouth to reply but nothing came out of it.
I gazed down at Swift, then back at him.

Swift was totally frozen, she didn't take her gaze of him.
"Are you some trouble makers?" He repeated.

This time sounded more angrier than before,
this time I was able to speak "N-no!" I didn't mean to yell
at him.

But he flinched as I yelled at him, I shouldn't have done that.
I could see he was reaching for one of his pockets.

He was a Hunter, he was quick with his hand.
He pulled out a gun. Me and Swift

flinched as he pointed it at me,
I was to scared to speak. I was gazing straight at the gun he was
holding.

I was just waiting for him to pull the trigger,
but then I noticed he hesitated with his
decision.

Swift was growling now, I wasn't sure if
she really should do that. But right now,
I was scared.

But then the Hunter sighed, the hand that he was holding the gun went down.
Then he put the gun away, then he said "Sorry."

I couldn't answer, I was still shocked.
Swift stepped towards him and said "Sorry? You pointed a gun at
an innocent girl!
" Swift was angry.

All the Hunter said was "Sorry" His face
didn't show anything but tiredness, and
his voice didn't sound sorry at all.

But then suddenly another voice sounded behind him "Seth! What do think you are doing?"
It was another boy that appeared behind him,

then another one.
The first one to appear behind him, looked alike him but instead he wear a white shirt with a grey
jacket, and blue jeans.

The second boy who appeared after him had brownish hair.
And he was wearing a blue shirt with a black jacket with blue jeans as
well.

Both of them was Hunters as well!
Swift gasped, she was caught of guard.
And so was I.

"Sorry Derek, but I was only having some fun." Said the boy who just had put the gun away,
"Fun? How can pointing a gun
at someone who hasn't done anything wrong?
"

Answered the boy with the white shirt.
Then the third boy who had a blue shirt said "Seth,
were did you get that gun from anyway?
I mean you not even a Hunter
"

"Shut up William!" The first boy said, I assume his
name was Seth.

Then the Hunter in white shirt said
"William is right Seth,
but then again,
were did you get that gun from?
"

I could tell he was angry.
Swift was gazing at them with a confused
look on her face.

"Mind you own business!" Said Seth angry.

I was just standing there frozen,
the boy named Seth, he pointed
a gun straight at me.

And he's not even a Hunter?
And said he was just having some fun?

What is wrong with him?


End of chapter 3.

Seth was the one who pointed the gun, Derek is the one with a white shirt and William is the one with a blue shirt.
Just telling to clear up some confuse. I need to stop writing for an hour or so, I haven't gotten any sleep at all!
Sorry that this chapter is short.
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Re: The Search For My Brother!

Postby Ellis » Sun Aug 30, 2015 10:12 am

Chapter 4

It was still raining, and the boys
seems like they are still arguing.

I gazed down at Swift, then I quietly
said "Should we leave while they
are arguing?
"

"Maybe that is for the best." Swift replied quietly as
well. I slowly backed away from them, but

they noticed straight away.
Then one of them walked up to me,
I think his name was William.

And said "Are you okay?
Did he hurt you?
"

"N-no, I'm fine." I answered.
Better being honest than lying.

"Good. And may I ask you why you
and your cat are outside of town?
Don't you know its safe in town than out here
"

William said, his blue eyes were switching between me
and Swift.

Before I could answer, Swift did "Why would
you need to know? You are a Hunter!
" She was growling and hissing at
him.

Then Derek walk up to us three, and said
"Don't worry about us being Hunters.
But it is dangerous here.
"

I tensed, I turned to Swift and picked her up.
Why? Well if they tried to do something, I
could just throw Swift on one of them

and then run for it. But I wasn't going to tell
Swift that, she would be mad at me forever!

I held Swift close to me, I wasn't going to answer anything
I decided.

So Swift answered "The only thing that are a threat to us,
are you two! And the human!
" Swift unsheathed her claws.
I don't think she knew that her claws was,

hurting on my skin, but I wasn't going to tell her.
"Human? Says the one who are not human and can't
defend herself! Just so we are

clear I'm more of a threat than my brothers!
" It was Seth.
He yelled at me and Swift from were he was standing.
He was looking at us with a furious face.

So Derek and William are his brothers?
Just by the word "Brother" made my cat
ears flatten,

they noticed it. I was defeated by those word,
that's how weak I am. Swift looked up at me from my arms,
she knew that it had effected me.

Instead of feeling scared and helpless, I felt lonely and sad.
The Hunters was quiet, it was obvious that they didn't know
what to say.

I slowly put Swift down. The rain had soaked us all for a
long time ago, it was cold. Thanks to the rain.

There was an awkward silence, till Swift said "Come on Lizzie, let's go."
With a sigh I nodded, then turned around and began to walk.

"Wait! Its dangerous! Let us come wi-" Derek was saying something but
I cut him of saying "Do whatever you humans want!
Its not my business.
"

Me and Swift kept walking, the distance between us and the human
and the two Hunters began to grow.

But soon enough we heard
William yell "Tell us at least were you two are going! We might be able
to help you out!
" Swift and I glanced at each other.

Then Swift and I stopped, "Safe City." I said.
A few minutes past before Derek replied.

"Sorry, me and William don't know the way!" I could tell that Derek sounded
sorry. But then Seth said something that made me gasp.

"I know the way to Safe City." Me and Swift turned around,
Seth's brothers were surprised as well. But Seth was just angry.

He was furious at us, but then his brother walk up to him.
Then they began to whisper to each other.

One thing for sure Seth didn't like it.
After a few minutes they were done whispering.
All of them turned to me.

Then Derek said "Seth will show you the way,
but not all the way.
But he would only agree if me and William

stayed here.
" I gazed at them with surprise,
Swift was growling. But then she sighed and said
"Well as long he takes us on the right path."

I could tell Swift was defeated as well.
Seth in other way, didn't looked pleased at all.

But as long he is willing to help us,
I'm thankful. But me and Swift better be careful.

Then Seth walk up to us and then past us.
It was clear that he wanted us to follow, after saying a quick
good-bye to William and Derek,

me and Swift hurried up to Seth. He was walking
way to fast! My legs were trembling, and I didn't dare to
say anything about it.

The rain started to fade away, sooner or later the rain
stopped. I was happy about that but me and Swift
were still soaked.

The stench of wet leafs and grass was strong.
I still couldn't believe that this human,
this cold human was going to help us.

One thing for sure, we can't trust him.


End of chapter 4.
Alright that was end of chapter 4!
I'm not sure what to comment about it.
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Re: The Search For My Brother!

Postby Ellis » Sun Sep 20, 2015 7:40 am

Chapter 5

We walked countless hours; I was getting very tired and hungry. But I wasn't sure of it was a good idea to tell Seth about it, the sun was going down. Swift didn’t seem to be tired. I was a few steps behind Seth, Swift was walking beside me. She knew that I was tired but she often would tell me to take a rest,
but this time she kept silent. Maybe she is a bit scared to tell Seth? Just then Seth turned around and said “Hurry up a little!” He was inpatient. Without answering him I forced my legs to walk faster, I could hear Swift growl from behind.

I didn't understand how a human can walk so fast! Well I am a slow walker, so that’s why I’m having a hard time to keep up. But my legs were weak; I was scared that I would collapse. The forest was very quiet; I was a bit scared of it being that quiet. But Swift wasn't scared at all, I don’t think she even had noticed how quiet it was.
I could not even hear the birds! Something was wrong, but maybe it was my imagination, so I ignored it. Once Seth stopped walking, he turned to me and said “We will stay here for the night.” I was quite surprise that it was dark already.

But I just nodded, I didn't like Seth, he was mean. Swift seemed happy that we stopped; she must be exhausted like me. I dropped my backpack on the ground, and then I turned into my cat form. I curled up against my backpack, and then Swift curled up next to me. I was surprised that Seth decided to sleep on the ground.
Well he didn't have anything with him anyway. Next morning I woke up, Swift was bristling. I didn't understand why she was bristling, tills I saw Seth was eating something, first I didn't get why Swift would be so angry about that.

Then I realized he was seating something from my backpack, and that made be bristle as well, I was still in my cat form. Seth noticed and said “Since I’m the one who is showing you the way to Safe city, you better share some food.” I was so not pleased but he had a point.

I hissed at him, and then turned into my human form. I then took my backpack from Seth and checked it. He had only taken one thing and that was an apple I had taken with me. I was planning to eat that once I got hungry! Then I took another apple that I had taken with me. Swift hunted her own breakfast, once I and Swift had finished eating.
So said Seth “Come on let’s go.” He was less angry but he sounded irritated.


End of chapter 5
I'm so sorry for the wait! I have been very busy with homework and now the past days I have been to unhappy to write, I will try to write more once i feel happy enough to. Sorry if this chapter was so short.
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Re: The Search For My Brother!

Postby Ellis » Sat Sep 26, 2015 11:04 am

Chapter 6

Well you can say that Seth isn't the nicest human, I tried to speak to him but only to get yelled at. I don’t really understand why he is so rude, so I asked him this “Why are you so rude?” He stopped walking and turned around; he was not pleased with that question. Swift was gazing at me with round eyes like I was crazy.

Do you want to find your own way to Safe city?” He said with narrowed eyes. He totally ignored my question! That’s rude! My respond was “I rather go alone than with you!” I said with an angry voice, but Seth just sighed and said “Well then, bye.” Then he walked off.

B-but how will we find our way to Safe city now?” Swift said to me as Seth disappeared. His steps soon was out of hearing and I said “W-well I don’t need someone who is showing the way, come on Swift!” Then I started walking again.

After sometime I regretted what I said to Seth and wanted to search after him and say sorry and ask him to show the way. And I could feel less safe. It was a bit colder than yesterday but I didn't stop to take out a sweater. Swift was sniffing the air very often and I knew it was a bad sign.

And she wasn't alone doing that, she and I had scented something strange for a while now. I wasn't too sure what it was but it must have to be something bad since Swift is on guard. I was a little bit scared and I looked around my surroundings as much as I could if something was about to jump at us.

But just then, someone came out of the bushes and went straight towards me with some weapon. “Hunter!” Swift yelled as a hand reached my backpack, fast I as could I dropped my backpack and made a run. I could hear foot steps behind me but then an angry yowl from Swift.

Then I heard of the Hunter yowled in pain, I guess Swift must had attacked him to buy me some time to get away. I ran as fast as my legs could, not sure where I was running but I didn't stop. Just as the last second I heard something in front of me but I didn't have the time to react before I ran into someone.

The hit was so strong that I accidentally fell on top of the person I ran into. Everything was spinning in my head, my vision was blurry but then I heard someone speak “Haha! It looks like you got yourself a girl Michael!” And then another voice appeared but his voice was much sharper with anger “Very funny Ethan!

I was dizzy but I could make out the scent of a Shape-Switcher and a Hunter, and the guy under me was the Shape-Switcher! I opened my eyes and looked straight at the Shape-Switcher. The guy had brown hair and blue eyes and two red colored fox ears on his head.

Then I heard “Hey girl, are you okay?” The voice came behind me; I quickly got of the Shape-Switcher. Then looked at another boy with black hair, he looked like Seth but his hair was a bit spikier. Then I said “I-I’m fine.” I wasn't sure if they were angry or surprised.

I realized Swift wasn't with me, panic flooded inside me. But then the guy with brown hair said “You surprised me, where you running from something?” I realized that I was out of breath as well so I nodded. The Shape-Switcher was calm, but they are enemies with Form-Switchers! Just by the thought made be scared. Are they enemies?

End of chapter 6
I guess this one is short as well, but that's it for now, I didn't have much time to write.
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Re: The Search For My Brother!

Postby Ellis » Sun Oct 11, 2015 9:39 am

Chapter 7

I gazed at the two boys in front of me, they don’t seem too aggressive. I was mostly focused on the Shape-Switcher because they are enemies to Form-Switchers. The Shape-Switcher noticed that I my gaze was focused most on him, so he simply said “Don’t worry; I won’t attack you or anything like that.” But I wasn't sure if I could trust him.

I was more worried about Swift and I couldn't scent her at all. Then the Hunter said “Is something wrong?” I wasn't sure is I was allowed to answer that since Seth would just yell at me is I answered him. They both looked at each other and then back at me and then he asked again. This time I answered him but it was more like an outburst.

I am fine but I don’t know about Swift, don’t know where I am and I am lost and I don’t know where to go!” My sudden outburst must have been a surprise to them since they froze with shock. But their faces were funny looking with surprise, then the Hunter said “W-what? Slowdown will you? So you are saying that you are lost and you don’t know where you are and you don’t know where Swift is?

Yes!” I replied my voice was sharper now. Then the Shape-Switcher said “And who is Swift? Well I assume Swift is a cat.” I nodded and then I said “We got separated since a Hunter came up from behind us and tried to attack me.” And then before they could answer I added “Why are Hunters so rude!” Then I regretted what I just have said, I had just offended the Hunter in front of me.

But he didn't seem angry at all, he actually looked like he was amused by my comment. Embarrassed I looked away from them, I should probably be careful with my words. Then the Hunter said “So you two were attacked and got separated and now you are lost, well if you want me and my brother can help.

I couldn't hide my surprise when I turned to them. They are much nicer than Seth! So other Hunters are not like Seth? That is something new. The Shape-Switcher said “You look very surprised, may I ask you why?” I hesitated before I answered. “Well I was traveling with someone before I and Swift decided that we didn't need help from him. And the worst thing about that guy was that he was very rude! And he acted like he was a Hunter but he was just a human and he yelled when I tried to ask him questions!

I could trust them that is for sure.


End of chapter 7
Sorry for the long wait! And sorry that this one is short but I don't really have the time to write.
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Re: The Search For My Brother!

Postby Ellis » Tue Oct 27, 2015 9:47 am

Chapter 8

After meeting Ethan and Michael, things have been easier but I am worried about Swift. I haven’t seen her for a few days. I can only hope that she is okay, maybe she is far behind us. But I don’t know, and Ethan says that worrying won’t make things better but I can’t help to worry. Since I lost my backpack, I have been worried about not being able to get food but Ethan and Michael are nice enough to share their food with me.

They came here ready! I mean they got lots of food and water. But the thing is that I won’t be able to change my cloth, I am stuck with my red shirt and red jeans. I don’t think Ethan or Michael have noticed about it yet or they just ignoring it. But right now it’s cold, it has been cold these past days but Ethan often gives me a blanket.

I like the color on the blanket, its blue with yellow stripes. But other than that, they don’t talk very much. It’s feeling like walking alone but you can feel that they are there but at the same time they are not there. And they are walking much slower that Seth did! I’m thankful for that. Now I don’t have to be worried about being too tired to travel the next day.

There have been a few arguments between them but at the end they end up laughing together like nothing happened. They are always walking beside each other and I am a few steps behind, time to time Ethan makes sure that I still following them. I have been wondering how far away Safe city could be, I was so focused on it that I didn’t noticed Swift was behind me! Me and Swift looked at each other and said nothing.

I could tell that Swift didn't want to tell them that she is here, she wanted their reaction. Just by the thought made me smile a little. Swift liked to surprise others, she has done it many times. And just then Michael’s ears twitched a little, he must have heard Swift come but I could tell that he wasn't sure where she came from or that she is here.

Then he turned around and looked straight at Swift. Swift gasped, she didn't expect him to figure where she was. Then Michael said “Trying to creep up on me and my brother?“ He wasn't angry but he was actually happy and I could make out a playful tone in his voice. Swift just stared, but then she finally replied “You got some good hearing I must say.” Swift was impressed by his good hearing.

Michael nodded; his eyes were gleaming with happiness, playfulness and a little bit of amusement. Then Ethan said “You must be Swift, am I right?” And Swift replied “Yes.” I was happy that Swift was back.


End of chapter 8
Sorry again for the wait, I'm starting to lose interest here but if I force myself then I get something done. Sorry I rushed through with this! Sorry and I didn't have the time to look through this text either.
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Re: The Search For My Brother! (CANCELLED)

Postby Ellis » Fri Nov 13, 2015 7:03 am

I'm sorry but I can't do this, I have lost interest and I need to focus on my grades. I'm sorry.
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