Eldemore

It's gonna be for fun, so I have no plans on publishing it, but I'll give credit to you three for the characters you made, and the plot.

I'll try and post later tonight but I have a meeting after school and then a concert. I'll try ad be more active after next week since that's finals.

Where everyone at?

Ug, sometimes writers block just doesnt go away, also if anyone is confused by my post about Draven a little ways up on the RP I post a simplified version.

It was fine, and sorry about the wait! I'm writing up my post now.

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In my head all I can see is Umbra sweezed under her cell's bed, while Chikara and Eldur are pressed against the wall closest to her confused. On top of all that Dr. Adlucinatio is in her security room in a mad rush to find Umbra, who she believes has escaped her cell. Interesting situation we have now.

Haha yah, I kinda saw it was a slightly comedic situation so I tried to keep up the feel of that a little with Eldur so things didn't feel to dark. Don't hate me for my 'Umbra= Umbrella' pun I've been wanting to make it for awhile. Also I know I'm playing him off as a slightly dumb and confused character right now but that's just because Eldur's had his head messed with.

Quick thought just to see what everyone else thinks,
I'm debating about turning Z into a good person, while I do love to play an evil character or two I feel like with the backstory It's be a good route for her to turn over a 'new leaf', though if you guys still think I should keep her as a kick-butt villain I will.

First of all that was a wonderful pun, secondly we needed this comic relief anyway. Also Z-620 could be a kick ass neutral and just tell Dr. Adlucinatio to do this ish herself.