Critique?
Posted:
Sun Aug 16, 2015 5:33 pm
by Sarill
I'm fairly proud of this thing that I just made, a headshot of an Elvian for my new avatar. I seen to have issues with lips, however. Does anyone have any suggestions? Or critique on the rest of the piece? Thanks!
Re: Critique?
Posted:
Sun Aug 16, 2015 6:02 pm
by Sarill
Thank you so much! That will really help!
Edit: I'm still going to have to play around with the lips, since I'm trying for a more natural look than the first, and the second doesn't deal with color. I tried to move some stuff around on the drawing, but it really didn't work so I went back to my sketch and poked at it. I now have a very quick, very sloppy flat color version of this, with the eyes fixed and the whole thing looking slightly different, if anyone actually wants to see it.