What do you think... Of my singing?

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What do you think... Of my singing?

Postby Lailic » Wed Jul 23, 2014 9:53 pm

So, lately i've been trying to improve my singing and I wanted to know what others think. I asked Archer and she said it should be ok to post since there is no personal info and no video.

I want constructive criticism please ^^ I'm Singing Jar of hearts by Christina Perri. I messed up on one part and it's painfully obvious lol Oh well I'll live

It has background music so its not just me singing there is the actual song music there as well XD

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If you would like me to do a song for you just post it here and I will if i can ^^
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Re: What do you think... Of my singing?

Postby The Song of The Wolf » Wed Jul 23, 2014 10:26 pm

It's okay, better than some I've seen. At some points it's a little high, so maybe you should try lowering your voice a little? And sometimes you talk to fast, where it's all blurry, and I can't understand you, so try practicing to say the words clearly. Other than that, you did great! ^^
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Re: What do you think... Of my singing?

Postby Lailic » Wed Jul 23, 2014 10:30 pm

That blurry part might be where I started too late on the lyrics and tried to catch back up XD I always mess up on that part. I'll try to say the words more clearly next time I sing it ^^ and Will definitely try to work on the to high parts, can you give me a time or the lyrics where I was too high maybe?

And thank you for your feedback! <3
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Re: What do you think... Of my singing?

Postby FrighteningAsuna » Sun Aug 24, 2014 5:21 pm

It was okay, but could use some work or a better microphone, cause the person singing isnt always to blame for some pitchy parts
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