by Silverhart » Sat Mar 04, 2017 7:53 pm
Wow! That's so awesome Ashenjay! I think it looks great! That sort of pose is really hard to get the proportions of. Normally you would compare various parts of the body to check the proportions, but since most of the body is blocked from view or incredibly foreshortened I don't think that method would really help. If you used a photo reference you could use that to double check proportions. If you didn't use a reference then you'll just have to wing it. Just looking at it, it's very pleasing, and nothing leaps out at me as wrong, so I'd think all the proportions are alright.
Both of the feet need work of course, but personally I wouldn't know how to fix them without a reference. Feet are notoriously tricky, and that angle is really throwing me off. XD I think their size is fine, it's just the angle of both feet don't really match the angle of the ankles. The feet should be going away from the viewer, which neither appear to be doing.
But otherwise it looks so awesome! Better then I could do if I'm being honest. ^^
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